TASK ORIENTATION
Does the essay follow the task? How do you know this? [Look at the assignment itself and the guidelines given.]
Yes because they follow the criteria of finding a topic
STRUCTURE
Locate the thesis–and say it in your own words to be sure you understood it.
Now find the topic sentences. Does each topic sentences sum up or introduce its paragraph effectively?
Yes each topic sentence introduces what he is gonna write about. And makes it clear on what I will be expecting
SUPPORT & ANALYSIS
Is evidence being used for any and all statements made? Does the author introduce, analyze, and explain the evidence?
What’s the strongest piece of evidence?
N/A
CLARITY
Write what you consider:
1. the clearest sentence
“Chemical spills have typically occurred most in bodies of water whether it is fresh water bodies or salt water bodies, it has been more of
a frequent event in such areas.”
I feel like reading this really summed up to me what I was getting into.
2. the most confusing sentence
“Chemical spills have become a detrimental and negatively impacting event that has become more and more frequent within the past few decades. Such
spills can vary from different types of chemical such as oil, petroleum, hazardous chemicals and even the potential of biological chemicals from spilling.”
Its not neccerserly confusing but it would help to explain what it really means.
PROOFREADING
Note here any suggested changes in wording, grammar, punctuation, or spelling:
No
OVERALL
What single change would make the most improvement in this essay? \
Nothing really maybe to expand on the sentences a little more